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Hello everyone, I am Yulia Puji Sadriana I am a 4th-semester student at Indraprasta PGRI University, I am majoring in English education. I majored in English education because, in my opinion, it would make working abroad easier, the reason I took English education at Unindra was that the cost was very affordable and close to home.
My activity during my time as a student was to deepen my
English vocabulary using applications and also watch films using English
subtitles. To be honest, I find it difficult to study regularly so I use a lot
of the media that I use on my cellphone, to increase vocabulary and listen to
songs while singing.
My dream job is to work that can get me abroad. Honestly, I
wanted to work as a designer but I wasn't allowed to go to art school, so I wanted
to work as a tour guide because I'm also a person who likes traveling and I'm
also a very curious person. and I also want to work in United Station.
My plan is, I want to finish my studies hereafter that I
take the TOEFL exam so I can apply for jobs that can connect with other
countries, then after I already have a job I want to take design school. Then I
want to take my second bachelor's degree in foreign universities so that I can
apply for higher jobs.
I hope I succeed in achieving my dreams. thanks for reading, I hope your dream come true 🎈
I hope ur dreams come true :), good luck!
BalasHapusHello Yulia 🤗 I think there is still an error in placing punctuation marks in your sentence.
BalasHapusIn the sentence "in my opinion, it would make working abroad easier, the reason I took English education at Unindra was that the cost was very affordable and close to home." I think after the word "easier" it should be marked with a period not a comma.
In the sentence "My plan is, I want to finish my studies hereafter that I take the TOEFL exam so I can apply for jobs that can connect with other countries," After the word "My plan is" does not have to be followed by a comma. And aftet ther word "hereafter" it shouldn't need word " that" so the sentence will be "
My plan is I want to finish my studies hereafter I will take the TOEFL exam, so I can apply for jobs that can connect with other countries,"
Thank you Yulia🤗